Monday, 12 October 2015

Head-to-Head: Satan's First Speech v.s. God's First Speech in 'Paradise Lost'


Milton employs his grand style in both Satan and God’s first speeches with their rhetorical forcefulness; there is however, a significant difference to how it is conveyed through their respective styles. Satan’s ‘bold words’, as Milton describes it, employ heightened language and imagery (‘eternal war’, ‘high disdain’, ‘excess of joy’, ‘glorious enterprise’, ‘transcendent brightness didst outshine myriads though bright’) to convey his heightened emotions of ‘high disdain’ for empyreal heaven he has been banished from. He combats the highest heavens by building up the stature of his language to match the ‘dire arms’ of God with his ‘glorious enterprise’. His power and supremacy is asserted through language, there is however also a hint of excessiveness to his raging rhetoric. God almost seems to be commenting on Satan’s excessive forcefulness of language when he muses on how Satan’s hate is that which ‘the main abyss wide interrupt can hold’; his hateful ramblings have rhetorical force but none of God’s intellect to back it up.

God, speaking from his ‘prospect high’ in Heaven, uses equally forceful rhetoric as Satan does in describing how his hateful phrases will ‘redound upon his own rebellious head’, and how he ‘created all th’ethereal Powers and Spirits’ as ‘sufficient to have stood, though free to fall’. However unlike Satan whose language is that which God describes as having ‘all restraint broke loose’, God’s foreknowledge, with which ‘past, present, future he beholds’, allows him to moderate his rhetoric so as to make it both forceful, and intelligent. Satan’s overly emotional state of being does not allow him such moderation. His hatred overflowing the ‘abyss’ is conveyed through his language overflowing the boundaries of syntax. He is aware that he lacks the ‘foresight much advanced’ that God has and bemoans it; he is aware that he has to rely upon the resilience of his ‘unconquerable will…revenge, immortal hate’, as well as deceit and trickery, to combat the ‘adverse power’ of God and the heavens.

Milton organises the intensities of God’s rhetoric into bouts of inductive reasoning where he muses over the ‘sole command, sole pledge’ of man’s ‘obedience’, and explores the themes of free will defences (‘sufficient to have stood, though free to fall’ man was with autonomy to choose between right and wrong), displaying an ability to reason with his analysis of will and reason, predestination, and defending his own foreknowledge for ‘their will, disposed by absolute decree or high foreknowledge’. God is also depicted by Milton as assuredly aware of the seeming contradictions between his foreknowledge, and the ‘unforeknown’ aspect of the Fall as an acquittal of his foreknowledge; thus he focuses upon ‘they’ almost exclusively in the second half of his first speech to remove himself from the picture, focusing on how man ‘decreed their own revolt’ and ‘ordained their fall’.

David Reid sees this act of keeping oneself ‘out of the picture as long as possible’ as being  ‘noble emotion’, which Satan embraces in IV, 366-373, sustaining a noble sympathy for the ‘gentle pair’ and their/’your’ predicaments. However in Satan’s first speech he is more extremely preoccupied with himself and shows it through his language, through his repeated use of ‘I’, ‘me’, and interlinking the other inhabitants of hell with him (they experience ‘equal ruin’ as him, they are ‘joined with me’, he and his fellow mates are in ‘mutual league’ and are ‘united thoughts and counsels, equal hope and hazard in the glorious enterprise’). He frequently sees himself in others, but this is due more to narcissism than equivocation with the people. Satan’s self-absorption is palatably felt, possibly to compensate for the ‘horrid silence’ of Hell by loudly, extravagantly making his presence felt to fill out the empty spaces. He is ‘vaunting aloud, but racked with deep despair’, raising his rhetoric in order to film the emptiness his powerlessness leaves him with.

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